tonight the love is gone

here’s the line
the one that’s said- before
i leave
plead
i say good-by
but tonight
it doesnt me a thing

the ring
the sing-song
of the tell-a-phone

but no one should know that
that tonight there will be no anser
for tonight there will be no call
waiting to be loved
but tonight his love is gone

 

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6 Comments Add yours

  1. sad, love is gone,

    powerful ending line.

  2. Bupinder Singh says:

    deep and sad..nice lines

  3. LifeInVerse says:

    Painful. But every word speaks emotion.

  4. beautiful.

    lovely lines.

  5. Nicole says:

    I like the way this flows, almost as though you could put it to music.

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