forgiveness

as silence creeps out from the night
as darkness lingers around the light
I recall-my lack of fear

as a man with praising hands 
has placed him self upon a religious stand
he declares we must be the ones to declare action
this I see is what needs tobe believed with every fraction-of who I am 

we know of his good intentions
but can not shear in his revelations
for so young but with scares on our hand
forgiveness – is for what we ask – forgiveness for we have grown tiered

– must you beg for action!?
for you have hands

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. Jingle says:

    forgiveness is hard yet the perfect thing to seek.

    well done…
    🙂

  2. Rajlakshmi says:

    beautiful words… well written

    Thursday Rally

  3. Alcina says:

    Unique..Very thoughtful

  4. Becca Givens says:

    Forgiveness releases so much – yet, at times, a difficult action to complete. Thank you for sharing ~becca

  5. Vinay says:

    thoughtful and beautiful words.. wonderful work!

    Here’s My Poetry For The Rally

  6. so true-“must you beg for action!?
    for you have hands

    liked it very much.

  7. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom says:

    nicely delivered!

    Please check my entry too: ” Perfect “

  8. Must you beg for action – for you have hands..

    Loving it!!

  9. irisdeurmyer says:

    Forgiveness is great to receive, difficult to give. Thanks for writing this thought provoking piece. Good job.

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