within the deepest depths

was it in the water
the taint that’s on our skin
could it wash away disaster
for its buried its self deep within
we see it in the lightning
yet hover oh so near
is it that were addicted
to what brings our heart beat oh so near

some times I do wonder
if it’s the fear that makes me breath
the idea that the beating could stop
bringing the end of me
is it that the silence seems to deathen me
that makes the thunder bring me back to life
yet I know some were within me that is not quit it
yet I know some were within me were the silence truly hits

the thunders only temporary
a simple substitute
a have seen what hits me
the crashing that makes me mute
there’s an ocean that hits the shore
there’s the rocks jutting high
there’s the thunder that never stops
to make you wonder why 
there’s the lands of the forbidden
with the sines of do not disturb
with the craken in the deepest depths
singing its lullaby
you know the crashing of the ocean will live on in to the night

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. Jingle says:

    powerful imagery, the crashing of the ocean is lovely line..

    Hello, how is everything,
    Share your poetry with potluck week 19 today.. Thanks..
    Poets Rally Week 38 will be 3 weeks apart from this week…got to attend poetry potluck to stay active…
    Cheers…

  2. Jessica says:

    This reads very lyrically, and takes you along a bit like those crashing wavs you mention!
    I like the mysterious edge to the last stanza.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/

  3. trisha says:

    a piece of heaven. life truly is ocean, we have to take its every face- truth in black and white.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/

  4. brian miller says:

    defintiely very lyrical and love all the nature elements you woven in i could hear the ocean…

  5. love your blog, your poetry is impressive!
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  6. ocean deep talent, wow,
    keep writing.

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