the simple things

If there were the simple things 
laced across the ground
 would the sadness catch you?
Would the temptation make you drowned?

If there was the fire near
 Blazing like a million sun’s
would it once again grab you?
Would it remind you of what you’ve become?

 Will there always be the tear for you
Scattered in her eyes

Will there always be that fear for you
the one that’s laid like a mat at your door
that she’ll come waltzing in the door again
with her dresses with satin seams

Is it always there for you
or could I make It go away
if she’s always there for you
if so why should I stay

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19 Comments Add yours

  1. wow… i love your passionate style of writing… especially ‘will there always be that fear for you’

  2. fiveloaf says:

    wow! i could feel a revolt of emotional trouble here.. thanks for sharing! here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/

    1. cjbeamish says:

      thank you, and your poem is beautifulll, im sso glad you showed it to me!

  3. Dishilicious says:

    is it really that simple? nicely put, really like this one!

  4. Jingle says:

    you got talent here, hope to see you share…

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  5. ashbeezone says:

    Gr8 Thought … Nice 1
    Take a look on my work
    A Poetry for the Nation ..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/blood-and-sweat-form-patriotism/
    !! Happy rally !!

  6. booguloo says:

    I hope you got the answer you wanted. It takes courage to ask..

  7. exitsbyalice says:

    oh i love this…that subtle sneaky fear…seldom articulated so well!

  8. inderdaadja says:

    “Will there always be that fear for you
    the one that’s laid like a mat at your door”
    Nice said!
    Great work!

  9. Julie Laing says:

    “laced”–what an excellent word. Thanks for sharing this one for the rally!

  10. Scent of my heart says:

    Questions not easy to answer, we could struggle with those, but lets hope answers are on the way … Loved it! Thanks for sharing with us!

  11. Scent of my heart says:

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  12. This is just stunning so much pain and emotional distress and captured so elegantly too

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